WHAT WE TALK ABOUT WHEN WE TALK ABOUT LOVE [By Raymond
Carver]. This is one of those books and one of those American writers like Tennessee
Williams, Ernest Hemingway and F Scott Fitzgerald that I never read at the
time. Not old enough; not interested or more likely, not mature enough to
appreciate them. So as a consequence American culture, American mores and in
particular a wide range of post-war American
social and economic policies with the prime purpose I suspect of
reinforcing the belief that individuals are responsible for their own destiny
have rather passed me by. And I am not now interested in catching-up.
It’s a series of [17] short stories. Can’t remember the
last collection of short stories I read; was it Olive Kitteridge [Elizabeth
Strout]? . . . [which I adored], so I am not against fiction in this format.
All the reviewers refer to his pared-down writing style as if it is to be
admired. One reviewer refers to the similarities between Carver and the
singer/actor and songwriter, Tom Waites.
Not a Tom Waites fan. They seem to have booze in common.
So anyway, this is a novel comprising of bleak vignettes
about men mostly blue collar, mostly drunks, mostly in broken or almost broken
marriages in the American Mid-west in the sixties. It is an attempt I think to
blend the particular and the universal, moving away from a straight narrative
retelling in search of a larger truth. As I said it is very lean, which I do quite
like although this is too big a dose for me: I think writing a short story well
is pretty difficult but generally he is an artist of show, not tell as in this
little exchange:
Mel and Terri are married both on second [could be twelfth]
marriages. The old couple are a couple in their seventies who have miraculously
survived a head-on collision.
‘’What about the old
couple? Laura said. ‘You didn’t finish that story you started’.
Laura was having a
hard time lighting her cigarette. Her matches kept going out.
‘Yes, what about the
old couple?’ I said.
‘Older but wiser’,
Terri said.
Mel stared at her.
Terri said, ’Go on
with your story, hon. I was only kidding. Then what happened?’
‘Terri, sometimes,’
Mel said.
’Please, Mel,’ Terri
said. ‘Don’t always be so serious, sweetie. Can’t you take a joke?’
‘Where’s the joke?
Mel said.
He held his glass and
gazed steadily at his wife.
‘What happened?’
Laura said.
I am writing a kind of biography at the moment [it is more
Elizabeth Strout or Knausgaard than Carver] and have set it up as a sequence of
scenes, short stories I suppose about people and events that I remember from my
life; the piece about Rick Taylor a few weeks ago [Its all over now Baby Blue] is from that manuscript. I’m not
trying to break the literary mould: the piece would be meaningless if I didn’t
explain at the end that the kid was in terror of Taylor. If I had left the
reader to fill in the gaps, as I suspect Carver would have done, one might have
filled the gap with something else entirely.
LIFE [By Keith Richards]. In 1964 I was living in
Easterhouse in Glasgow, commuting into the city where I had a job, my first
job, at Boyds in Buchanan Street. I loved the Stones; their music, their
attitude as represented by the long hair and their total lack of respect for
the previous order and the way things must be . . . were expected to be.
Somehow, I heard they were playing the Barrowlands Ballroom
where I had been on a couple of previous occasions to the Saturday night dance,
where you might get lucky with a girl. Like Easterhouse however, Barrowlands
was a famously tough venue for both performer and punter. The Stones couldn’t
have been looking forward to the gig much given that their normal stamping
grounds were the green pastures of Richmond, Surrey at that time.
I still say to this day that this gig was the greatest
single gig/concert I have ever been to: there are no words. They were
incredible. I had seen The Animals a couple of times and they were the
benchmark, no-one came close to Eric and we had several very good Blues-rock
bands: Lulu and the Lovers for example, Miss Lawrie and her amazing blues-shouter
voice and delivery but the Stones? They did it the way it was supposed to be
done, with one of the best rhythm sections on the planet, not that we knew that
then; the astonishingly accomplished Keith who could play the Malaguena at age
seven then studied the Chicago Blues masters from the age of fifteen or so. In
depth and I mean from the ground up. And of course the magnetic, charismatic
Mick with his mastery of the black man’s diction and the idiomatic phrasing but not a copy, entirely his own.
Can’t possibly remember what they played. Route 66 was probably in there and I
think Round and Round was in their set. I do remember that I Wanna be your Man was one of the highlights; it hadn’t yet been
released but was due out very soon but you could have been in Detroit or
Chicago, so perfectly had they recreated that authentic American sound.
Keith describes this actual gig in Life:
We got bigger and
bigger and more and more crazy until basically all we thought about was how to
get into a gig and how to get out. For eighteen months, I’d say, we never
finished a show. The only question was how it would end, with a riot, with the
cops breaking it up, with too many medical cases and how the hell to get out of
there. Nothing like three thousand chicks throwing themselves at you. Or being
carried out on stretchers. All the bouffants awry, skirts up to their waists,
sweating, red, eyes rolling.
The limp and fainted
bodies going by us after the first ten minutes of playing, that happened every
night. Or sometimes they would stack them up on the side of the stage because
there were so many of them.
Myself, I had literally never seen anything like it; maybe
I had been attending the wrong gigs but certainly girls weren’t being passed
overhead at Animals shows. I’ve wondered since then how spontaneous it all was:
did the girls knew from some grapevine or other that this was how you behaved
at a Rolling Stones gig? Later, I saw them escape; I just happened to be in the
right place at the right time and saw them running across the road and getting
into a transit van literally sixty seconds after they finished the set. Someone
else must have collected the instruments together. And, there were no chicks with them: all left behind.
I had gone with a couple of girls I knew and one of them
had been one of the one’s who had fainted and been passed overhead to the
front. Groped every inch of the way, she was a bright intelligent girl from a
good home with about a million A-Levels and a good job, not at all the sort one
would think to surrender herself like that. On the bus home I tried to ask her
what on earth had overtaken her emotions but all she muttered was ‘Mick’ and
that was all I could get out of her. He was there, in relatively close
proximity, if she played her part; moving dancing turning and shaking his
Maraccas . . . one of the sexiest men in the world, within reach. Within reach now.
Hardly a word of this incredible effect Jagger had on young
women in Life. Later, much later in
the book when Keith is comparing Mick to Bowie, we get an understated, measured
summation of Jagger’s remarkable potency. It’s not grudging exactly he does
recognise Mick Jagger’s qualities as a singer, dancer and front-man but it is
the same old, same old . . . Mick doesn’t play. He composes [pretty much every
lyric on every song] but he doesn’t play and Keith perhaps not unreasonably,
rates his and Charlie’s contribution to the success of the band higher because
it is the music that kept the group at the top for 25-years, not Mick Jagger’s
sexual persona.
It’s very honest, almost soul-searchingly so; didn’t expect
that. When it is interesting, for example on learning how to play the Chicago
Blues in the early part of the book, it is tremendous. I like Chicago Blues,
not to the same degree as Keith does but his insights and explanations are
quite riveting. He later opines that the Stones greatest contribution to
popular music is to have re-introduced the Blues, in all forms, to Americans. I
think he has a point.
When he gets to the salacious sex & drugs he loses me;
not interested and clearly no sign of self-abnegation despite his ‘honesty’.
Its six-hundred and ten pages long, a little too detailed for my taste
especially the almost daily diary of Anita Pallenberg’s latest drug abuses. But
when he is talking about the music which is often, I loved it.
He doesn’t make any particular claim to be at the intersection
of desire and power but the Book is full of clarity and disdain for hypocrisy; I
for one would like to see it challenged more rigorously. The main takeaway I
personally had however was the . . .
find me an adjective . . . incredible,
amazing, astonishing . . . fact of these two South London guys even meeting.
A chance in ten zillion.
GOLDEN HILL [By Francis Spufford]. This is a popular work
of fiction [No 88 in the Amazon Fiction charts at the moment]; it has recently
been high in the UK Paperback top-ten. I liked it, it sags a bit [a lot] in the
middle but it picks up in the second half. Has absolutely incredible reviews: ‘Dazzlingly
written’ according to the Sunday Times;
‘Ingenious’ sez the Guardian. ‘Virtuoso’
according to the FT. Can’t be clearer
than that. The author is a Fellow of the Royal Society of Literature, so he
will know his punctuation and his pronunciation backwards, and it shows: he is
very, very good at selecting just the right word, just the correct noun
although as one finds with this kind of writing, there are a hell of a lot of
adverbs. Me? I couldn’t write a novel like this to save my life. I haven’t got
the Greek, or the Latin which I guess someone who teaches writing at Goldsmiths
very much does. It’s a little bit cluttered with words for my taste but there
are certainly sufficient high-brow reviewers in places like the Telegraph and The Times more than happy with this kind of exposition.
Its set in New York in 1748 still effectively a frontier
town caught up to a greater or lesser extent by the Anglo-French wars in
Europe. The putative main character is Mr
Smith who arrives on Halloween [1st November] straight off a
boat from London with a money order in his pocket for a thousand pounds. We do
not learn what he intends to spend the money on until 3-pages from the end. It
starts off written in a pseudo-Georgian style language which it is hinted at
replicates the form of the times; Smollet, Fielding and Hogarth are mentioned
as sources but since I have never read any of these writers and am unlikely
ever to want to, it is stylistically over my head. In any case, he soon drops
this style, realising pretty quickly that you cannot do that these days if you
want to sell books. A smattering of authentic-sounding 1748-dialogue in the
first couple of pages, such as, ‘You
impudent pup, flirting your mangled scripture at me! Speak plain, or your
precious paper goes in the fire.’[page 7]. But by page 103 we have long
arrived at conventionality, with, ‘For
heaven’s sake,’ said Smith, ‘I am not
trying to blackmail you. I am not trying to blackmail you!’
It is descriptively rich but Stufford has given himself an
almost impossible task with his plot-line: withholding.
He has to withhold the key information about Smith, who he is and why he is in
New York until almost literally the last page. It is an impossible task. And
the OMG moment when it does come, is a let-down to say the least.
So instead of being able to develop his main character and
sketch in some background and motivation to explain his actions he is forced to
divert off into other side-shows; a playlet; an arresting homosexual
relationship; an extended dinner-party scene with the possibility of a
relationship with an heiress. These scenes are imaginatively well done and turn
out to be in fact the meat and backbone of the narrative but they are a
substitute for what we thought the book was going to be about: the note for a
thousand pounds and when the reader begins to realise that this is it, so to speak and that yes, there are no oblique
references or hints about what he is really about then he or she starts to
wonder well, what’s the point: just a stylistic exercise? It’s hard not to
notice that we are being manipulated, which is death to the enjoyment of
suspense.
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